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RE: Needleminder - huckleton - 03-16-2024
i think somewhere in needleminder alex should be shown a "Needleminder Body Count" (he becomes briefly aware of the story he's in) but instead of being related to the story itself, it's a number of how many people in the world died of aging-related health conditions over the course of the main cast attempting to leave. I want to give him anxiety
RE: Needleminder - palabomeno - 03-16-2024
I think a "Needleminder Body Count" should be on the screen at all times for him but it's a completely random number that means nothing
RE: Needleminder - brilokuloj - 03-16-2024
(03-16-2024, 03:55 AM)huckleton Wrote: i think somewhere in needleminder alex should be shown a "Needleminder Body Count" (he becomes briefly aware of the story he's in) but instead of being related to the story itself, it's a number of how many people died of aging-related health conditions over the course of the main cast attempting to leave. I want to give him anxiety
He already has anxiety but this is a really good idea. Even funnier if I make it proportionate to the amount of time it has taken me to make the story to that point IRL. I think it would fit in on Floor 3 which is the closest we get to the ending before the concept of space/time gets blown up for the rest of the story
RE: Needleminder - huckleton - 03-16-2024
dont worry i know he has anxiety. just want him to think he's personally responsible for entropy